What are your thoughts on stream of consciousness?
I’ve heard some people praise this to no end (usually mentioning Faulkner or Joyce or Wolf or etc.) and I’ve heard others absolutely hate this.
What are your thoughts on it? Do you like stream of consciousness? What are ways that you feel writers poorly convey this style?
Good question. When well done, it’s a great style of narrative. I like to think of Jack Kerouac as the epitome of stream of consciousness. His motto: "First thought, best thought." To make a passage feel like stream of consciousness is difficult, but to make it feel like it’s been improvised is nearly impossible.
When writers abuse stream of consciousness it’s usually because they haven’t fully established their characters and want an easy way to allow the reader into the character’s head. It can feel like cheating when this happens. Rather than developing their characters fully through action and description, they try to tell the reader who the person is through their thoughts/manner of thinking. This type of narrative is difficult and takes practice; an unpracticed SoC writer is easy to spot by how unbelievable and poorly conceived their characters thoughts seem.
And who says they don’t like stream of consciousness, anyway? It’s the dominant mode of narration, these days. I should think it would be hard to get around it.
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